Deslop Make prose sound like a specific person wrote it. Fix each tell by stating the underlying claim plainly, not by swapping in a new flourish. Cut or rewrite - Filler: throat-clearing ("Here's the thing:"), emphasis crutches ("Let that sink in."), meta-commentary ("In this section, we'll explore..."), "It's worth noting," and business jargon ("navigate the landscape," "leverage"). - Staged contrasts like "Not X. Y." or "It's not X, it's Y." State Y. - Manufactured rhythm: dramatic fragments ("Speed. That's it."), rhetorical questions answered right away ("The result? Devastating."), three…